Flash Fiction

11 Mar

Over on his blog Terrible Minds, published horror author and cool person Chuck Wendig put up a Flash Fiction challenge. There are some AWESOME stories up already. Inspired, I decided to see what I could come up with.

The Rules:

I want you to write a story in five sentences.

No more than 100 words.

You can view it, if you’d like, as:

Sentence 1: Beginning / Inciting Incident

Sentence 2: Middle

Sentence 3: Middle peak, act turn or pivot

Sentence 4: Climactic turn or twist

Sentence 5: Resolution

That is not a strict map, but rather, a reminder that a story is a story, not a snapshot: it has a beginning, a middle and an end.

I posted it over there in the comments, but I’m also posting it here because I has a proud, however small.

At The End Of The Day

I roll over just before the door opens, and lie still as steps cross the room.

Pressure on the mattress, and then two thumps as heavy work boots land on the floor.

A familiar sigh, and then a person-shaped coldness lies down and stretches out next to me. A hand like a glove left out in the snow touches my face.

“You knew I’d be back,” he says.

“Yes.” I close my eyes, eager for his smell of bay rum and old flannel. I only smell the formaldehyde, and wonder if it was worth it.

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4 Responses to “Flash Fiction”

  1. Steven March 11, 2016 at 10:08 am #

    So I admit that the subject line of the post made me think this was gonna be a story about Barry Allen…

    • jennnanigans March 11, 2016 at 10:09 am #

      Bwah ha ha! That’s awesome!

      … Maybe it IS! You can interpret it however you want! 😀

      • Steven March 11, 2016 at 12:39 pm #

        Well he *did* die several times…

      • jennnanigans March 11, 2016 at 12:42 pm #

        Exactly! Comic books/tv shows do that all the time!

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